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Wednesday, August 29, 2012

Chapter one of my FANTABULOUS story!!!

HEEEEEEYYYYYYYY so this is my new writing piece and it is mostly for teen girls struggling with love. if all goes well i will be posting another chapter on friday. Enjoy!
CHAPTER ONE: QUICKSAND
“ I guess you weren’t the person I thought you were.” I angrily pounded into my keyboard. I hit send. The miniscule bar filled to 100% and then the whooping sound of the message being sent traveled through my ear buds and into my ears. I waited. It seemed to take forever for ‘green’ to respond. That was the code name for my crush. Everyone at our lunch table had one. Finally he tested back.
“ I’m not for everyone.” The cruel hearted message said.
I turned my head into my pillow and cried. This wasn’t supposed to happen. Of course I didn’t know what was.
 You see the day before I put a note in his locker with his phone number on it. Actually I wrote it and was about to throw it away before Michele snatched it from me and shoved the pint-sized but particularly powerful message into the painted locker. It was on.
Then the stress began. The buss ride home took centuries. The walk home gave Evan (my neighbor) time to grow a beard. Homework took 10 hours instead of 2 and life was dramatic quicksand that sucked me in every time I moved.
Let’s just say things got a little out of hand after that. Basically he said he didn’t even want to be friends and was being really rude as you can tell.
I bravely but barely typed back, ‘even if I didn’t like someone I would go to the dance just to be nice. Goodbye. And have a nice life.’ I collapsed on my bed and sobbed.
don don doooooooooonnnnnn!
well that's it for today folks! post a comment telling me if you want to hear the next chapter.

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